Can u advice on my wedding toast?

Ok there are so many errors I feel like re writing the whole thing for you but then you wouldn't learn how to improve it yourself. Here are some tips though... you said that you are extremely honored to be the best woman today (and that sounds bad because it's supposed to be the bride who is the "best" woman on her wedding day) usually you are a maid of honor or a matron of honor or a bridesmaid, the groom is the one who has a best man, but generally it's not call the best woman. Second of all you mention that you are going to say something about the happy couple, but you only talk about the bride. In your opening you thank the people for taking time out of thier busy schedules to be there (as if there was something they really had to drag themselves away from to be here, and it just sounds bad) You should maybe instead say something like I'd like to thank everyone for being here tonight espically those of you who had to travel. You should definately welcome the groom to the family and then give your bit about your sister and then you should say something about the two of them together as well. For example, Even without all of my sisterly advice I know that Jason and Jess are going to have a very happy life together, I can see in thier eyes how much they love one another and I'm so happy that they have found true love. (or whatever, you could make it more personal then that I'm sure,) It's something that you should add though instead of just stopping at your tips and going into a toast, I mean you completely left out anything about the two of them together! Good Luck!!!